Thursday, 25 September 2014

Melting Moments

Melting ice cream I got two scoops of ice cream and I got chocolate and vanilla it is yumm and fun and melting .

Monday, 15 September 2014

Favourite character.

Leroy is my favourite character because Leroy used his hands to make the traps to catch the thieves. Leroy is very baring because he can think of things to help when bad things happen the is also very brave. He is not scared to go out by himself into danger areas to help his friends and that is why Leroy is my favourite character.

My reflection: this is my character Leroy is my character Leroy save the day and that is why he is the best character.

Wednesday, 10 September 2014

My Narrative


This is my narrative.  It was hard for me to think of ideas.  The story map helped me figure out what order to put my writing in.
Next time I need to make sure I do my Story Map before I start my writing.
I am proud of my story.