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Learning is ...

Pakuranga libray

it was hard for me because I for got and I liked it and it was fun because we got to make thing and it is fun and I had fun and hope you like it.

Favourite character.

Leroy is my favourite character because Leroy used his hands to make the traps to catch the thieves. Leroy is very baring because he can think of things to help when bad things happen the is also very brave. He is not scared to go out by himself into danger areas to help his friends and that is why Leroy is my favourite character.

My reflection: this is my character Leroy is my character Leroy save the day and that is why he is the best character.

My Narrative

This is my narrative.  It was hard for me to think of ideas.  The story map helped me figure out what order to put my writing in.
Next time I need to make sure I do my Story Map before I start my writing.
I am proud of my story.

Story Map

This is my work it was a bit challenging because I needed to write my ideas for my narrative.  I got stuck on my sequence.  It was hard to put my ideas into order.  I got help from my teacher.  This is going to help me write my story.

Comparing two sites for ice cream recipes

I have been learning to comparing two sites for ice cream recipes and it is fun it was not hard for me because I know about ice cream.

Popplet

I have be lemming about ice cream
 we went to tip top it was fun for me because we got to go in tip top and we had inform tip top is cool and cold is well.

Science

WALT draft our speech using an online graphic organiser.
Science is fun this was hard for me because I do know what to do and I think that everyone should learn to do science.  Next time I could do some research first before I try to draft my speech

Recount Post cards

WALT write a recount using a post card format.

This is my writing it was fun because I liked it when I got to go to jump we were excited because that was my first time and it was fun because to got to swing on the rope then we had to go home.

Bio poem

IAMT write a bio poem
I know I will be successful when I can
- write adjectives that describe me.
- write about me feeling .
- write about me what  I love to do

I found this poem a little bit hard because I couldn't decide on what to write.  It was easy to write adjectives because I knew what they were.

My best holiday

On the holiday, can you guess what I did?  ... I went to whakatne. IT was fun and cool.  I got hot in the car.  On the way there because it was a Long way I went to sleeep in the car. then when got to the Shop I Woket up My. Dad said do you want a an ice came I saind yes please Dad he said ok the ice came was yum. Then we fall asleep. agan . my Aunty ,s I then it was Lunch time we went to the pools it was cool and fun we got hungy so we went to the Fish and Chip Shop. was yum yum went home after that I fell .a sleep . I woke up then. I got to go to see my Gamdad we had to go I said buy he said buy too. We went Home.

My antonym poem

I have written an diamante antonym poem about Spring and Autumn.

My Reflection

Little Yellow Rocking Hood

Little Yellow Rocking Hood

Once upon time there was a little girl named Little Yellow Rocking Hood. She was staying at her Grandmother’s house because her mum was sick in the palace.  She had a bad fever and her dad had to go to work she had to go and stay at her Grandmother’s home.   On her way there she saw a tree with a sign saying beware of the grizzly bear.  Suddenly she saw the bear and Little Yellow Rocking Hood  ran and ran and ran until the bear ran away because the  bear knew he would get lost if he carried on chasing her.  She found the way back home and she was so pleased, and Grandmother was happy to see her.

The end

By Summer

MY REFLECTION

My postcard

My Writing Reflection

bio poem

This is  my bio poem